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April 26th, 2015, 8:03 am

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Reply Whip the Rabbit, April 26th, 2015, 4:12 pm

That owl is such a lovely dork though. cx
I'm glad he's helping her. CX

Reply Anon (Guest), September 16th, 2015, 11:08 am

She's more interesting when she has some flaws like insecurity about her body and things like that. Because then she will grow to overcome them and even if she doesn't and she still has the flaws that make her relatable and interesting, she endures and grows and stuff or something. There's nothing wrong with being imperfect, she's still enough as she is or something like that. The owl is cute and supportive and not very mean. I agree with the owl she's more powerful than she knows and she unconsiously made an skinny illusion spell or something without even saying the spell when you have to activate spells with the wand, so she must be pretty powerful unconsiously more than she knows. Nice seeing chubby lady badasses.

Reply Anon (Guest), September 16th, 2015, 11:11 am

Wait so this was done in April and you didn't continue the awesome story? I am a little disappointed but that's okay it was a great read, thanks so much for writing it and maybe I will imagine the rest of the story in my head ha, ha. Or no maybe not, she's awesome though and this was a great story. I guess I read it too late, too late in the game? Oh well. It's Sepember so April was how many months ago? Five months ago, well it was great while it lasted. I read it in one sitting. It was great thanks for writing it

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