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February 24th, 2015, 3:36 am

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Reply Anon (Guest), September 16th, 2015, 10:43 am

Why couldn't she have stayed fat when she turned into a magical girl? That's a bit disappointing.

Reply Helsic, December 20th, 2017, 8:46 pm

@Anon: wait for the end!!! I haven't finish it but it's gonna be explained at the end!

Reply ZHODY the delfinator, October 1st, 2015, 12:47 pm

??? It shouldn't be "it's that supposed ...", it should be "is that supposed ..."

I'm loving this comic so far, but...? Why are there no commas present? Commas are needed to break up phrases and without them dialogue can be very hard to understand.

Reply Helsic, December 20th, 2017, 8:46 pm

@ZHODY the delfinator: Sorry Sorry, I'm not an English Native speaker! so I'll fixed it for sure!

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